Ok.

I like it overall only don't you think that mario should, I don't know stop moving his legs when he is hit. Oh yeah teach me how to make buttons work!!! I still can't make them work!

lol

Way much better. Just some holes in the story but still good.

umm... ok

yea you could do better. it was kinda short. plot was good though.

AWESOME

This wipes out the competiton!